Evaluation Part 6

I would like to think that we have gone to the extent of reaching our target audience. I believe that our title sequence mirrored what was asked of us by our audience in the first place. The plot of our title sequence was based on what some of our target audience goes through or may go through. Our title sequence shows what genre it is so it's clear to our target audience. It's about the hopeless romantic trying to get the girl but he doesn't because he's such a geek that she can't see beyond that. It's comedic because as some of our target audience attends school, there may be a lot of geeks that fancy the popular girl but could only dream of talking to her.
We got back quite positive feedback from our first screening. As Jessica works in London City., we got some beautiful shots which the audience like and the shots came out really well thanks to the good weather; the light hits them in the right way. Those shots give you a sense of serenity even if it's just briefly. The way each shot is integrated just adds to the final product of our film. Our group was very dedicated to finishing it, getting it right and just do the best that we can do. We all had something to add to our title sequence, I hope it shows because we all worked hard for it to be the success I hope it will be.

We ensured that where there was speech, it was very clear and loud enough to hear over the non digetic sound. I think that the length is fine but we could have made slight adjustments.